Exaggeration can be used in good writing, especially when told in a matter of fact way.
When we passed by some cranes in Seattle's harbor used for loading ships, they loomed up pretty high over us, and I asked the grandchildren if they thought there was an elevator in them, or if the man who works in them had to climb up a ladder.
Hubby offered his opinion. The crane simply picks up the operator in its teeth and lifts him to his station, like a giant friendly brontosaurus.
I'm glad he put in the "friendly" part, having learned his lesson from telling the previous generation that the Goat Tree (merely a boll-ridden gnarly specimen) came to life at night and ran through the forest where we were camping. They still bring that up.

Really?
Not "I want to work on a crane someday."
Not "It would be fun to work on a crane."
But "I USED to work on a crane."
She had it all worked out what it was like, what she did, and pictured it in her mind. A storyteller, born and bred. True to the breed, she is. I suspect she's not going to grow up to operate a crane. President speechwriter, maybe?
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